Score: 10

"I'M A SCAT MAN"

submission: The Tubgirl Collab

date: July 25, 2007

HUDDLE DUDDLE DEE DOON DAA DAA DOH!

DOON DAA DAA DOH!

Yes this was quite a good cartoon badger although I enjoyed your afghanistan game alot more.

Score: 10

"HAMSTERS YO!!!!!!!"

submission: Ackbar the Movie

date: December 5, 2006

"Slowly, she entered the room that Kiyone slept in. She looked around in shock. Pictures of naked, or nearly naked women plastered on her walls.

"Damn..." she whispered to herself. "What the...?" she gaped at a picture of herself, in a bikini, at the hot springs. Slowly, she sat on Kiyone's bed and stared at the picture of herself.

Kiyone...my love. I wish I could share with you how I feel. I read your journal today. I know I shouldn't have, but when I saw the picture of me in a bikini, I had to read it.

'Now I know how you feel about me. I felt myself getting aroused by reading about one of your dream. You said, that it was the first night that you and I were together. When I first proclaimed my love for you. You started to massage my back. Then your hand slipped down the front of my clothing, rubbing along my breasts and nipples...

Kiyoke layed on the blanket of her bed, images of the naked Ryoko entered her mind for the 50th time that day. "She's absolutely gorgeous." she whispered to herself.

Ryoko and her had shown no mercy the night prior when they made love several times in a row.

LAWL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Score: 4

"Sigh."

submission: TooF Hate, My Reply 2 You

date: August 2, 2006

You know at this point, it doesnt matter how quickly you slap these terrible things together, people will adore it, 5 it, and frontpage it anyway.

You've become like alot of authors here unfortunately become.
It is possible, to make a succesful series, make some money, and NOT sacrifice the quality of it for the sake of faster production.

But seeing as the last 3 episodes of the series have been that, well, have fun being a product lable, Mr.Jonathan Ian Mathers Jr.